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My happy poem by =Gil212:iconGil212:



Happy Poem

I’m happy.
While it may seem sappy,
I’ll amaze you,
By writing a haiku:

Happy, happy, joy, joy, joy
Happiness is a red fuzzy toy
Happy, happy, joy, joy, joy.

Did it take many guesses?
Fuzzy the lobster’s the one it addresses.
He’s fuzzy and warm,
And part of the big happy lobster swarm.
He also brings luck,
And I will never sell him for a buck!

Seeing something shiny would,
Make me as happy as little else could!
My cat is so cute,
Being sad around her is moot!
Being happy is fun,
I wanna eat a cinnabun!
Shiny things make me smile,
They make my happy go up a mile!

I’ve got a happy song stuck in my head,
But if I sing it I would be dead! *cough*Melissa*cough* ^_~
All things shiny are nice,
Now I’ve said that thrice!

Ramen is hot and yummy,
It’s yummy in my tummy!
As long as we’re on the subject of food…
Donuts put me in a happy mood!
And can I have some cheese?
Please? Please? Please?? XD

I’m running out of things to say,
But that doesn’t mean my happy has gone away!
My happy is to big to put on paper,
It makes me dance and caper!

If I’ve made you smile I’m happy,
And sorry if this poem’s kinda sappy…
The lobsters wish you happy too,
In fact, they say…Moo?!?!?!?!...
I’m not even gonna ask…
OH! It was Mr. Moo wearing a mask!
Well, the lobsters, Mr. Moo, and I bid you ado,
Remember, try to be happy the whole day through!
Bye!
Try not to cry!
Bye Bye!
Don’t let this parting bring a tear to your eye!
Bye!!
©2006-2009 =Gil212
:icongil212:

Author's Comments

ok, this is MY happy poem...^_^
i had fun writing this....
can you tell?!?!?! ^^;
^_^

by the way....happy is only one syllable......^_^
try it...it's either hap-py
or hapy
so...yeah.......i made it only worth one ^^;
^_^

Ok, i have a challenge for you!!!
the challenge is...

Write a Happy Poem.
ok, the rules are:
1. it has to start with "i'm happy..."
-you can write more but you don't hafta...
-the second line is usually 'sappy'......
2. it has to rhyme..
-i rhymed it ever 2 lines ( cheese, 'next line is' please, etc...)
3. make it funny!!
-have fun writting it!!
4. make it at least a few stanzas long
-one side of a peice of lined paper is good.....
5. have fun!!

Comments


love 1 1 joy 3 3 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconqueen-of-the-jungle:
I love your happy poem. Well done. If it were a contest, then you would have one.

--
Oh you're a naughty little sheila. She's grumpy, but crikey what a beauty.

Have a look at the size of those jaws. One mistake and I'm just a big pile of goo.

Crocs Rule!

~Steve Irwin

~R.I.P. Steve ~
:icongil212:
one what?
^_^
heeheehee...i so funny...^_^
thanks!
^_^

--
MY EVIL LOBSTER MINIONS SHALL RULE THE EARTH!!
[click me!! i'm HAPPY!! :w00t:]
:iconlio-the-artist:
lol nice poem...

Meredith started this whole thing coz i always write depressing poems. hahaha...and i see now that thanks to me! you all ppls are writing happy poems now. lol just kiddin... thanks to Meredith actually. insired by my deep sadness (at times) which doesnt mean i am not happy. lol...

i shall write my happy poem in the near future.

and once again i really like urs!! its so funny! lol
:icongil212:
thanks!
DID IT MAKE YOU SMILE?
... oops...caps lock and i dont feel like retyping it.....^^;
but did it? huh? did it?
^_^

--
MY EVIL LOBSTER MINIONS SHALL RULE THE EARTH!!
[click me!! i'm HAPPY!! :w00t:]
:icongoldeneagle1337:
:D now im happy

--

My japanese name is 山下 Yamashita (under the mountain) 拓海 Takumi (open sea)

My fighter is Zelden Tallin in DA's TS Crew

:icongil212:
:w00t:
^_^

--
MY EVIL LOBSTER MINIONS SHALL RULE THE EARTH!!
[click me!! i'm HAPPY!! :w00t:]
:icongoldeneagle1337:
yay

--

My japanese name is 山下 Yamashita (under the mountain) 拓海 Takumi (open sea)

My fighter is Zelden Tallin in DA's TS Crew

:iconaxleaxis:
^_^ It makes me happy!!!
:icongil212:
yaaaaay!!
^_^
:w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t:

--
MY EVIL LOBSTER MINIONS SHALL RULE THE EARTH!!
[click me!! i'm HAPPY!! :w00t:]

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